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For the "Bad!fic" Challenge on Due South Flashfiction.
For apetslife, whose prompt was:
SCENE 1. Rays Apartment. Ray is sitting in the dark, crying. And listening to EVANESSENSE: "Even In Death" Give me a reason to believe that you're gone I see your shadow so I know they're all wrong Moonlight on the soft brown earth It leads me to where you lay They took you away from me but now I'm taking you home Ray: Oh Frasier! Why did you have to die? Frasier's VOice: He says the words over the [CHORUS:] I will stay forever here with you My love The softly spoken words you gave me Even in death our love goes on Yes, Ray, even in death our love goes on. Ray: (COvers his ears, falls on floor, cries) Oh no! I'm hearing your voice, Fraser! I'm going crazy!!! EVANESCENCE: Some say I'm crazy for my love, Oh my love But no bonds can hold me from your side, Oh my love They don't know you can't leave me They don't hear you singing to me Fraser's voice: [Chorus] I will stay forever here with you My love The softly spoken words you gave me Even in death our love goes on Fraser: Ray, Ray, I still love you! EVANECENSE: And I can't love you, anymore than I do People die, but real love is forever. Ray crawls over to a photo of Fraser) That's right, Fraser, real love is forever. (He kisses the picture) Why, oh, why Fraser did you have to die in that fire, even if you were saving those babies and the other ppl? (He gets a BEER and drinks it all withone gulp.) I can't live without you, my love! EVANESSENSE: "Going Under" Now I will tell you what I've done for you 50 thousand tears I've cried Screaming Deceiving and Bleeding for you And you still won't hear me (I’m going under) (Ray goes to the kitchen and gets a knife. ) RAY: Bleeding…blood. My blood for you, Frase. EVENASSANCE: Don't want your hand this time I'll save myself Maybe I'll wake up for once Not tormented daily defeated by you Just when I thought I'd reached the bottom I'm dying again (Ray sits on the couch and looks at the picture. He looks at the knife. Photo. Knife, photo, Kinfe, Photo. Knife.) Huh. What should I do, Fraser? I don't want to live without you. FRASER;S VOICE: Don't do it, RAY! (Ray dosen't listen. He takes the knife and makes a little cut on the back of his arm. ) Ow! (He has some beer) I can do this. For you, Fraser!!1 EVANESENCSE" I'm going under Drowning in you I'm falling forever I've got to break through I'm going under So go on and scream (Ray screams) Scream at me I'm so far away I won't be broken again I've got to breathe I can't keep going under RAY; (turns his hand over and starts to cut his wrist.) For you. FRASER: (BEcomes solid) RAY!!!! EVANNESANCE: "Away From Me" (I LOVE THIS!!!~MY FAVORITE!! SOOOOO SAD`) Crawling through this world as disease flows through my veins I look into myself, but my own heart has been changed I can't go on like this I loathe all I've become FRASER: RAY, RAY> RAY, RAY RAY!!!!! RAY: (Stops cutting, bleeding) FRASER!! Are you really here? FRASER: No ray I am a ghost, but I don't want you to die. Don't do that. Suicide is never the right answer. (MR. Rabinowitx said to put that in somewhere, so its here LOL) Ray: Its not fair, Fraser! I love you, and I want to be with you, no matter what the world and people say, but your not alive, and it's sooo sad! (Cries) FRASER: Cry, Ray, cry and wish for me to be with you. And with the poeer of music, maybe we will be togther. Just promise me you won't kill yourself? RAY: (Cries more) Oh yes yes Frase I promise! I wont kill myself! (THE MUSIC gets really really loud) EVNSSNCE Is this real enough for you You were so confused Now that you've decided to stay We'll remain together You can't abandon me You belong to me Breathe in and take my life in you No longer myself only you There's no escaping me, my love Surrender Darling, there's no sense in running You know I will find you Everything is perfect now We can live forever You can't abandon me You belong to me Breathe in and take my life in you No longer myself only you There's no escaping me, my love Surrender Surrender Surrender Surrender Surrender RAY: I surrender, Fraser I surrender! FRASER: (Says the words while the song plays Goodnight, sleep tight No more tears In the morning I'll be here And when we say goodnight, Dry your eyes Because we said goodnight, And not goodbye We said goodnight And not goodbye (NOTE: Ray falls asleep and then something happens, okay, I don't know what but its magic and when he gets up Fraser is there with him in bed (if its a tv movie they wont be naked b/c you cant show that) Ray: OMG! FRASier! You are alive!! FRASER: Yes, Ray, the power of our love and the music of EVANESSCCENSSCE has brought me back to life! (THEY KISS) and music comes up as they kiss and it fades out and you see the ocean. EVENENCE"Before The Dawn" Meet me after dark again and I'll hold you I am nothing more than to see you there And maybe tonight, we'll fly so far away We'll be lost before the dawn If only night can hold you where i can see you, my love Then let me never ever wake again And maybe tonight, we'll fly so far away We'll be lost before the dawn [Chorus] somehow i know that we cant wake again from this dream it's not real, but it's ours Maybe tonight, we'll fly so far away We'll be lost before the dawn [Chanting] THE END…? OK, that’s it! Pls send feedback. I hope you want to do this, b/c it would be INCREDIBLE! Write back, please. :) Amy (Amanda) Mizner TO: Bob Fulgram, Ambinder Management FR: Amy Lee RE: Script idea Dear Bob- Taking a minute out from frantic writing to run this idea by you. I think it could be a terrific project for us, and you know how long I've been trying to hook us up with a film. Please read my attached film treatment. I think it would make a great story. Think of it as Brokeback Mountain crossed with Ghost. And it’s a musical, too! I've even got a few new lyrics that would work for the opening…
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